This week I was lucky enough to be at the same networking event as two
of my VIP – Fast Track Mentor Clients, and was able to hear them speak about
their businesses. It was great to hear the clarity in their voice as they
succinctly described why you would want to use their services.
The ‘elevator speech’ can be a powerful business-marketing
tool, especially if there are a number of similar professions in the one room,
like there was this week.
We had two Mortgage Brokers in the room and without being disrespectful – the first Mortgage Broker stood up and spoke about the wonderful features that her and her company could provide us. She continued to say how they were the number one mortgage broker in Australia, how she would travel to you and that they had 25 lenders to draw from, etc. Not very exciting and it didn’t really entice you to want to find out more about what she did.
When it came time for my client to speak, she clearly and concisely
described not only the features of her business, but also how she could
work with you. She described who she worked with, what challenges they could
face in securing a home loan, and how she took the time to make sure she
provided the right solution for each client. As you listened, it was
clear she had a real passion for her business, and she would work to get the
right result for you or anybody you may refer. So as opposed to the first
speaker, who simply gave you the 'what' of her business, my mentor student also
provided the 'why' and 'how' - giving a much more complete
picture.
An effective elevator speech needs to communicate immediately to your ideal clients what you can do to solve their problems or challenges. The outcome being that within the 60-second period, this person will not only want your business card, but will also want to speak with you further about your services.
It’s important to take the time to develop your ‘elevator speech’ and if you don’t get it right the first time – that’s okay. Keep working on it and make the necessary changes, and it will come together.
So how do you create an effective elevator speech? There are numerous
ways in which you can pull this together, but below are the guidelines that work
best for my clients. But before we get to that I thought I would share with
you, the elevator speech that my client used this week- bear in mind that you
have only a short period of time to make a real impact with what you
say:
“My name is Kim Wight from Smartline
Personal Mortgage Advisers and I help you finance your property purchase with
the right loan structure and interest rate to meet your
requirements.
I do this by taking the time to personally
understand your current needs and future plans, and provide you with the best
advice and outstanding service to satisfy your needs now and into the
future.
If you know anyone thinking about finance or worrying about rising interest rate they would benefit from speaking with me.”
That was Kim’s, now it’s your turn:
- Begin with your name:
- State who you work with:
- Speak about some of the challenges that they may be facing:
- Talk about the solutions you provide for these challenges:
- What is the call to action you would like?
I find that it is useful to develop a number of different elevator speeches, and then you can determine which ‘speech’ best suits the environment you are in. Don’t forget to have one that is fun and light-hearted! Take time to prepare, and make sure you also practise your ‘speech’ as well. If you feel comfortable enough, why not ask the person sitting beside you to provide you with feedback after the meeting?
Let me know how you go in developing your ‘elevator speech’, in fact, why don’t you share it with us all, in the comment section of my blog

another? I was thinking about this today, after
speaking with one of my mentor clients – let's call her Liz. During our call
today, she was reflecting on the difference that our work together had made on
her business the past three months. For me, it was very humbling to be there on
the other end of the phone, listening to her reflect on what our working
relationship meant to her.
12months of working from this platform – I feel as if I am still learning. I
often wonder if one will ever not stop learning when it comes to Social Media –
it moves so quickly, that at times I feel like I’m just not keeping up. 




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